Wie wil mij helpen om een kinderverhaal - Forum

Anoniem
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Marja schreef:
te schrijven?

Het moet een verhaal zijn waar je minimaal 7,30 minuten over doet. En ik moet er geluidseffecten onder kunnen zetten, want het is een opdracht voor muziek. (muzikaal verhaal voor kinderen xD)

DarkShadow
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DarkShadow schreef:
ben meer van spannende dus mij hulp moet je niet hebben haha ^^

Anoniem
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Marja schreef:

Potsie schreef:
Ik heb wel nog een verhaaltje (ooit geschreven voor engels) gebaseerd op een kinderverhaal.
Moet ik het even voor je zoeken?

ou leuk/fijn zijn. ^-^

Anoniem
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UntilForever schreef:

Potsie schreef:
Ik heb wel nog een verhaaltje (ooit geschreven voor engels) gebaseerd op een kinderverhaal.
Moet ik het even voor je zoeken?

ou leuk/fijn zijn. ^-^

The three wishes of Vanilicious ~ written by Marliese Once upon a time there was a selfish princess in the Mario-kingdom named: Vanilicious. She said she was beautiful and everyone loved her. But that wasn't true. She wasn't beautiful and she had a heart of ice. Everyone feared her. But of course she had a beautiful sister named Chocolicious with a golden heart. Everyone loved her sister. She was the most loved of all princesses of the kingdom. "I must help the poor children and give them food and water" she said, "I must help all the people that are sick and also, I must help my sister, because she's very lonely these days" Far away, her sister Vanilicious started screaming: "IF I JUST HAD THREE WISHES, I'D BE BETTER THAN CHOCOLICIOUS!!" But unfortunately Chocolicious heard everything. She screamed: "NOOOOOOOO" and ran to her sister. Her sister didn't know she was cursed... Suddenly 3 leaves got blown into her hands and they started talking: "You are jealous of Chocolicious? With some wishes, your life is going to be delicious!" Chocolicious screamed: "No Vanilicious! Don't do this! You don't understand, but I can't explain, you have to believe me!" "I wish... I wish... Every villager would ignore my sister" Suddenly everything started to sparkle and gone was Chocolicious' attention. Vanilicious cheared and cheared, her revenge had finally begun! "yes, now everyone will see that I, Vanilicious the second, am absolutely the BEST!" "But you don't understand, how could you do this? Don't you know it bring a lot of responsibillities?" But Vanilicious ignored her and went to the villagers. Chocolicious tried to stop her, but she didn't listen. When they had arrived, Vanilicious got in shock, because her wish did came true. All the villagers had lost their attention but Chocolicious' lovin' boyfriend, the prince of Hyrule, still treated her like the chocolate she was.. Vanilicious said: "that's enough! I wish the prince would disappear out of her life!" And Pouff, he was literally gone. Chocolicious cried and cried, the one she loved had left her life. "Why... Why did you do this? I'm your sister! You took away my everything!" "hah, now they will love me forever! Now you'll feel how it's to be me!" But when she turned around, nobody saw her. They all walked by. “I told you…” said Chocolicious. “SHUT UP CHOCOLICIOUS, I can handle this” “Okay bitch…” “What did you just say??!!” “Nothing, nothing, just go on” Then Vanilicious stood up and said very clearly: “I wish my sister had the life I always had!!” There were sparks “Finally, our lifes have switched! Now she’ll be the one that get ditched” For days and days, she smiled and smiled, like she was the happiest child. “Forget about Chocolicious, this world is made for Vanilicious!” This selfish child still didn’t know that life like this didn’t taste like pudding… A few days later, Vanilicious talked to herself and said: “Oh dear, I hate the attention of the boy, they always want to be with me and it’s so annoying. I want my normal life back. Everything was so much easier when I was invisible for everyone” She said it way too loud and then the three leaves come and everything went back normal. Vanilicious was very happy with her invisibility and Chocolicious was very happy too. She loved the attention of the boys. But the best of all; The sisters loved each other…♥ THE END

Yay! DANKJE.